Thursday, April 9, 2015

Hugs for free :) (WR)

"Mumma I am hungry!" Neha shouted and came running into the kitchen. "Neha, how many times have I told you to keep your school bag in your room and not throw it on the floor" admonished her mother. "Oh Mumma I will do it later. Now give me something to eat" Neha pleaded. "OK but before that you should give me a tight hug" her mother said. Neha immediately hugged her mother as tight as possible with her little chubby hands. "Thank you sweet heart. I will prepare something for you" her mother said and got busy in preparing sandwiches.

 "Mumma why do you always want me to hug you?" Neha questioned. "Because it makes me happy" her mother said. "Does hugging make everybody happy?". "I guess so" her mother said. Neha thought for a while and suddenly exclaimed "Oh Mumma I have got a wonderful idea. Why don't we open a shop and distribute free hugs to everybody. Like that, everybody will become happy" . Her mother looked at Neha's innocent face and laughed. She hugged her tight, wishing to preserve her childhood innocence forever.

8 comments:

  1. That was adorable! And Neta reminded me a lot of my daughter who's 6. It'd be good if they stayed that way, wouldn't it?

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    1. Yes, why do they grow up? :) Thanks Nick. Glad you liked it:)

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  2. My daughter, Hannah, had an attitude like that as a toddler and young child. So precious and dear.
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    1. Yes Barbara those are really precious moments :)

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  3. Changing Times....again I am giving my true feedback.... lovely story,innocence captured beautifully...if not for the word limit...the story could be continued taking advantage of the teachable and learnable moment as well...awareness...about what other things that can make everyone happy...and why that's needed...I don't have to say more...for the counsellor in you knows much more....Thankyou for having taken up such a beautiful challenge,indeed this is making me think further each time...I am loving this feeling....:)

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    1. Thank you Sowmya :) Though an amateur, but I am attempting my hand on flash fiction, hence the word limit :)

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    2. Changing Times, you are an aspiring writer and I have pushed myself behind you....you writing inspired me and the word flash fiction ignited my inspiration...I have made an attempt at writing my first flash fiction A- 55word Adopt and accept...:) Thankyou :)

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    3. Oh that's great! I would love to read it :)

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